This seminar was very different that the others the leaders made a ppt on different awards for ell. I think this format got a lot of people’s attention and made the whole seminar very enjoyable overall. For me it was the seminar I paid the most attention to and had listened the most even though I still didn’t talk much. We had awards for best best teammate, best friction writing, analytical writing , and best pice of work etc. reflecting on ell history from grade 6 to 8. They mentioned their ell teach for grade 6 often that sparked some debate and came to a conclusion that even though he was not too fun but he was still a good teacher. For the scores it seemed much harder to get a high because people often didn’t have strong evidence to back up their points.
For the leading it was really smooth the leaders had good control with timing and order. I liked that they mentioned that there was no wrong opinion for who deserves what award. The ppt they prepared was also fun and well designed.
Nice reflection, I like how you talked about the seminar point by point.
However, I think it would be better if your blog post was less “dense”. Like currently, it’s just 2 paragraphs and each paragraph is a collage of points. You could have for had a seperate paragraph for each point or smth. (just my thoughts, but if this is your style then thats fine too)
Also, there were a few grammatical errors here and there, and this is where A.I excels at. Personally, for all my blog posts, I like to have A.I just check and fix all the grammatical errors etc, (without changing the content); That seems to do pretty well.