Reflection for Seminar 3(Holiday Advert Analysis)

Not much I can reflect for Seminar 3.

The biggest thing is that I finally found a way to get highs in seminars.

I found out that points are easier to become highs when:

  • The connect to other points
  • They evaluate anything
  • Comparisons.

First point is easy, but second is hard because it’s really hard to say:”I think …‘s point is good because…”

Instead what’s easier to say is, just add the evaluation after your point for example:

”…. I think my proposal is optimal because….”

or

”I agree with … his / her point is good because…”

But even better, you can make some evaluation that opens up discussion. For example:

” <insert point here>… I think my proposal is optimal because… but it might still have room for improvement as in … it still doesn’t fully address, his / her point can help my point because …”

or

”I agree with…  <insert point on here> his / her point is good because… but it can still be improved as in … it still doesn’t fully, I think we can modify …, I think my proposal is good because …”

If in your evaluation, you also compared your point to other points, without just relying on absolute criteria, its going to be even more better(“its performs better than…” instead of “It performs well at…”)

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  1. Yes, we’re getting closer and closer to the breakthrough ‘aha’ moment 😀

    A useful way to think of this is that you are co-constructing ideas.

    There’s a technical word ‘intertextuality’ which is often explained in terms of a weaving metaphor – threads of language carrying an idea through different texts and time. These threads can be pulled apart and weaved again in different ways for different purposes in different contexts.

    When you are discussing ideas in class that originated from texts you’ve read or your classmates’ spoken ideas (also considered texts), you are contributing to that metaphorical weaving.