chapter one
there was a guy that’s called Steve that has no rizz and his friends decided that they
went to a wizards shop to know why he doesn’t have any rizz ,but the wizard is actually evil and teleported them to the underworld.
Steve woke up in terror. He found his friends limbs everywhere. He was terrified, but he can’t do anything about it.
Chapter two
Steve began to work on his survival gears. He walked around underworld and went to check on things like materials for houses weapons when he was daydreaming. A deep roar came from the forest. A giant beast came out with his massive double chin he used to crush people, Steve is left with fear his leg trembled handshake and the only thing he can think of is to run. He ran so hard that his legs were so sore and then after half an hour, there was a trip and then the fall so Steve Steve fall in the hole that has a spit in it and as we know Steve has bad luck and as always Steve got into a new trouble there were yellow spotted lizards and lets see his knew story in the hole
I like how you have merged several styles here, including the yellow-spotted lizards from Holes 😆
You have an interesting mix of highly effective descriptive phrases but also some basic errors – mostly tense discrepancies and punctuation issues.