It is a normal Wednesday, but Mark is abnormally exciting. His dream is to travel through the galaxy and he is going to achieve it today because after ten years of training, he finally get the chance to be an astronaut.
Mark arrived at the launch pat, sitting in his spaceship listenning to the countdown. Ten, nine, eight… two, one. He was launched into the space.
Mark was totally amazed my the stars and the nebulas. They are like cottons flying in the space. Mark’s mission was to find a planet for human to live on because the earth is too small to hold everyone. After several weeks of searching in the space, Mark find a perfect planet for migration and decided to call the planet “Tally”. He started to plan for landing but suddenly realized a problem: he don’t have enough fuel for return. At first, Mark planned to have a second spaceship for sending him some fuel. But that spaceship was broken just before launching and need two months for fixing. Therefore, Mark needs to survive on “Tally” for two months. It’s a big challenge because Mark don’t know anything about this planet. He had no choice. So he started to land his spaceship.
A bit basic and has quite a lot of grammar and spelling errors, but the task is achieved. You have managed to set this up nicely for a second installment.
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