Down in the deep, dark den
Lies a fox that preys on hens
Leaping out after dusk, at night
It spreads deadly destruction with its might
A beast, destined to never be caught
It runs along the road, not to be sought
It takes off, done with the hunt
Laughing heartlessly at those who grunt
Not to be caught by net, nor snare
It still takes the lives of hare
No man could halt its way of life
No spear could stop it, nor arrow, nor knife
With a hide of streaming silver
Its fur would take not a sliver
With Laelaps to come as a foe
Both could deliver not a blow
As a paradox to puzzled men
Let me explain to you, then
The beast was destined to never be caught
Laelaps, however, fated to catch its prey
It leapt again into its deep, dark den
Trying to hide in its pen
Laelaps kept chasing through
Its fur wet with morning dew
The Fox, with a cunning mind
Had to avoid from being bind
Running back out, it found no refuge.
The chase was coming to become huge
Zeus put a stop to this, not to choose
Instead by turning both into statues
He cast them upon the eternal sky
Where they will forever stay
So the above was written by me, and I had ChatGPT write one too:
In twilight’s tale by Theban throne,
A fox did flee through fields unknown.
Fleet of foot, a phantom blur,
No net nor noose could capture her.
She sprang through shadows, swift and sly,
With moonlight glinting in her eye.
The gods decreed her doomless flight—
No mortal hand could halt her might.
Each dawn she dashed through dewy dell,
While hounds gave howl and hunter yell.
But none could snare her, none could bind
The cursed chase she left behind.
Then Zeus, with zither-thunder voice,
Grew grim at such a god-born choice:
“A beast unbound, a hound unfailed?
Let fate decide what force prevailed.”
So Laelaps came, the hound divine,
Whose jaws caught quarry every time.
He chased that fox o’er hill and glen—
A paradox to puzzle men.
The fox that fled could never fall,
The hound would hunt beyond them all.
Through time they twisted, fierce and fast,
Until the skies were stirred at last.
In silence struck, the world stood still,
As both defied the gods’ own will.
Then Zeus in storm-swept streak of flame
Transfixed them both in stony frame.
Now stars above still spark and spin,
Their chase eternal, trapped within.
A tale of speed, of fated fight—
The fox, the hound, and endless night.
Please comment on this and let me know which YOU think is better!
P.S. This post is related to https://mushroom-scholars.org/group_page/teumessian-fox-myth/ . Sorry, cause I couldn’t find how to add a link in the comment cause I couldn’t find how to add a comment…
Good 😀
Great stuff! It’s a nice idea to present your own work and your collaboration with AI for comparison.
Here’s the link to all the Mythology stuff on Mushroom: https://mushroom-scholars.org/project-mythology/