scallion oil noodles
Stanza 1
Coming home late from work
When I got home
There was still light in the dim roo
thick white smoke out of kitchen
It was grandma making scallion oil noodles
Stanza 2
beads of sweat on her forehead
the hand holding the spatula turning red
her hunched back seems more than it was
Stanza 3
With kind smile, she bent down
brought it up
The noodles in the white bowl
drizzled with boiling scallion oil sauce.
The golden scallion in the hot oil,
release a smoky aroma that seeps through the the noodles.
Stanza 4
This was my favorite flavor
Since I was a child.
When I was little, my grandma would sprinkle a few sesame seeds on the noodles
gently say that it would be delicious
only when mixed well.
My eyes couldn’t help but moisten.
beads of sweat on her forehead
Great! You’ve certainly managed to evoke the feeling of grandma’s scallion noodles there! I’m glad you persevered and shared it 👍👍