Good story! The idea of the three Rick Riordan story worlds is awesome. I’m not familiar with Magnus though, but I’m definitely a fan of the other two worlds.
Advice: Be aware of the timeline system, since its really confusing really. Percy knows about the Egyptian world and the Kane siblings, as shown in the Son of Sobek sequels. The time of that is right after the Percy Jackson & the Olympians books and the Kane Chronicles. And of course Magnus Chase is Annabeth’s cousin. Also Chiron is in contact with all the other deities from Rick Riordan’s other stories, hinted in the Trials of Apollo:The Tower ofNero, in which Chiron went to a meeting about “a severed head and talking cat”
Chapter 3 remains intriguing, but I’m less clear who or what some of the things you refer to are. In particular, could you add a brief gloss to where you introduce ‘the hunters’ and ‘the magicians’ to give us a little more information about who or what they are? I’m also wondering if the dracaena are plants or are they also some kind of mythological creature? Maybe you need a sentence to provide disambiguation. I am also interested to know where your heroes are now. Are they in the rift between mythological worlds that you describe or still in Manhattan?
Is Sadie the Sadie from Rick Riordan’s “The Kane Chronicles”? I’m not familiar with those books, but it popped up when I searched for ‘Sadie Egyptian mythology’
A suggestion for a future episode: Maybe we could learn more about the portals and how they work?
And finally, I hope you enter the library’s story writing competition!
Good story! The idea of the three Rick Riordan story worlds is awesome. I’m not familiar with Magnus though, but I’m definitely a fan of the other two worlds.
Advice: Be aware of the timeline system, since its really confusing really. Percy knows about the Egyptian world and the Kane siblings, as shown in the Son of Sobek sequels. The time of that is right after the Percy Jackson & the Olympians books and the Kane Chronicles. And of course Magnus Chase is Annabeth’s cousin. Also Chiron is in contact with all the other deities from Rick Riordan’s other stories, hinted in the Trials of Apollo:The Tower of Nero, in which Chiron went to a meeting about “a severed head and talking cat”
Yeah I almost every story written by RR. What class are you in and what’s your name? We should have a little talk.
No, I take that back. We need to talk. I’m Andrew from 6.6, E201 and you’re welcome to come find me.
Chapter 3 remains intriguing, but I’m less clear who or what some of the things you refer to are. In particular, could you add a brief gloss to where you introduce ‘the hunters’ and ‘the magicians’ to give us a little more information about who or what they are? I’m also wondering if the dracaena are plants or are they also some kind of mythological creature? Maybe you need a sentence to provide disambiguation. I am also interested to know where your heroes are now. Are they in the rift between mythological worlds that you describe or still in Manhattan?
Is Sadie the Sadie from Rick Riordan’s “The Kane Chronicles”? I’m not familiar with those books, but it popped up when I searched for ‘Sadie Egyptian mythology’
A suggestion for a future episode: Maybe we could learn more about the portals and how they work?
And finally, I hope you enter the library’s story writing competition!
Hi Dr.T (i think you are), yes, this is Sadie from the Kane Chronicle, and it’s wonderful to see that people are reading my writing. ( •̀ ω •́ )