Comments on: “Wonderful” Hangzhou Field trip https://mushroom-scholars.org/wonderful-hangzhou-field-trip/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:51:26 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/wonderful-hangzhou-field-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-57 Mon, 13 May 2024 07:28:05 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10566#comment-57 Perhaps you could add a photo or two of your experiences to better engage the reader.
I like how you don’t shy away from stating the things that upset you but that you keep your report balanced and also celebrate the things you enjoyed. It feels genuine.

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/wonderful-hangzhou-field-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-56 Mon, 13 May 2024 07:26:40 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10566#comment-56 In reply to ruaruarua.

Useful observations, thanks for sharing!

]]> By: cm https://mushroom-scholars.org/wonderful-hangzhou-field-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-46 Sun, 12 May 2024 13:43:54 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10566#comment-46 In reply to ruaruarua.

Thanks…?

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/wonderful-hangzhou-field-trip/comment-page-1/#comment-21 Sat, 11 May 2024 04:17:02 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10566#comment-21 Good typeface, that makes your passage more organized like an article. And also the interesting things that you experienced through the days in Hangzhou are really vivid. I could emphasize your feelings and emotions through your words.

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