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Thx Josh

I didn’t see any red wavy lines

Oh, and consider adding images to make your work more immediately attractive to potential readers.

In fact, the seminar leaders can and should join in the discussion. You and your partner were very altruistic in forfeiting your speaking time so others had more chances to speak. The goal of the leader is primarily to get other students to participate, but that doesn’t mean you cannot make join in yourself, just have to be careful not to dominate 😉

There are still quite a few grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. What, for example, is happening here in terms of punctuation?
“everybody would end up like this:
? old and ! die one day. don’t fear…”

Look for the red wavy line as you write.

To be continued

Yeah.