Perhaps the long sentence in your first paragraph could be broken up into shorter sentences? Be kind to your readers 😉

A few errors to pay attention to:
“the few main keys I think are connect to this book are,” – something wrong here. This needs rephrasing.
Check your spelling of desert 😉
“Eyesite’s” isn’t correct. Can you think of a better way of expressing this?

Consider using images and topic tags so your blog post is more immediately attractive to readers and shows up in blog listings of the related topic.