Comments on: When in Rome…&Dark Tourism Seminar 2 reflection https://mushroom-scholars.org/when-in-rome-dark-tourism-seminar-2-reflection/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:43:31 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/when-in-rome-dark-tourism-seminar-2-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-200 Sun, 09 Jun 2024 01:01:17 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11191#comment-200 In reply to cm.

Yes and yes 🙂
The beginning and end feel like a personal response from you, but the middle bit feels like an encyclopaedia or even a text book reading about ‘when in Rome…’ and Dark Tourism rather than your own response to the seminar discussion.

There’s no need to change your blog post as you still get a pretty good score. Just be aware of this as you go on to high school.

]]> By: cm https://mushroom-scholars.org/when-in-rome-dark-tourism-seminar-2-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-199 Thu, 06 Jun 2024 14:19:50 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11191#comment-199 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Does this really look like AI…? It contains some research from online though. The only thing ever using AI is the picture we were supposed to create. Do I still have a chance to edit it so I can refer to your comment?

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/when-in-rome-dark-tourism-seminar-2-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-196 Thu, 06 Jun 2024 02:22:53 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11191#comment-196 Well expressed, but perhaps a little generic. It would be better to at least comment on one or two of the examples in the materials I shared prior to the seminar or those discussed in the seminar. That way, we can see your response isn’t too AI-reliant.

Nevertheless, this is a solid piece of writing

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