https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-jiu-zhai-gou-in-si-chuan/ Teaching & Learning English Wed, 06 May 2026 05:51:06 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-jiu-zhai-gou-in-si-chuan/comment-page-1/#comment-1955 Wed, 06 May 2026 05:51:06 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=17678#comment-1955 Great read. Pay attention to the grammar and punctuation. It was a little difficult to read. Also relate the journey back to the SOI

]]> https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-jiu-zhai-gou-in-si-chuan/comment-page-1/#comment-1946 Tue, 05 May 2026 01:50:21 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=17678#comment-1946 Great work! I feel like you did a great job in describing the experience at jiu zhai gou. The language was very descriptive and graphic. However, when reading it, I felt like the top half of the blog was a bit dense in text. For example there wern’t many transitions between sentences, or spaces between paragraphs . Use html to make this look real weird

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