Comments on: Trip to HangZhou https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:49:48 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Leo Lee https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/comment-page-1/#comment-312 Thu, 08 Aug 2024 02:10:31 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10608#comment-312 In reply to XE.

Who are you, bro?

]]> By: XE https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/comment-page-1/#comment-86 Tue, 14 May 2024 03:34:53 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10608#comment-86 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Thank you for your suggestions and feedbacks. Already made the adjustments.

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/comment-page-1/#comment-65 Mon, 13 May 2024 08:40:03 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10608#comment-65 We get a good feel for the trip and your account feels appropriately balanced. It would be nice to know more about the power station visit, that is a little different from what I would expect and sounds quite interesting. Maybe add some images to help give your readers a visual context? You deal with missing West lake well. That is exactly what I would expect you to see on a trip to Hangzhou, so the fact you didn’t is quite a surprise.
This is a great quote: “it’s to search for those combinations of “One heart and two Leaves”, like how in society, two dim people plays the perfect foil for the one that shines”. I might borrow that for my future blog posts 🙂

A few errors to tidy up: “every one of could learn from “; “the bus would get going in a for hours”; “tried out” and check your verb tenses!

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/comment-page-1/#comment-50 Sun, 12 May 2024 14:09:43 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10608#comment-50 Good roasting…this was exactly what I thought hahaha

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou/comment-page-1/#comment-47 Sun, 12 May 2024 13:54:44 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10608#comment-47 ]]> 👍

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