Comments on: Trip to Hangzhou https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:51:26 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: X4 https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-108 Thu, 16 May 2024 01:20:55 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-108 ]]> I liked how specific you described your feelings and thoughts 💋

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-59 Mon, 13 May 2024 07:54:00 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-59 Oh, and I would like to add that you have a very effective hook at the start of your blog post 🙂

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-58 Mon, 13 May 2024 07:47:42 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-58 I agree with the other comments that the photos enhance your writing. As soon as I opened the page, the big photos give me a positive feeling. I also like how you have positioned the photos on different sides of the page to break up the layout a bit. It makes the layout interesting to look at, a bit like a magazine. It is also great to see you adding a reference to our reading into your work. Your experience with different perspectives is supported very well by the allusion to Atticus.
Note that there are a couple of minor errors here:
This made me related to what Atticus had said in the novel “To kill a mockingbird”no space here: “She was….

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-53 Sun, 12 May 2024 14:11:54 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-53 ]]> In reply to Leo.

😸

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-52 Sun, 12 May 2024 14:11:30 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-52 In reply to Mushroom.

thx! hahaha

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-51 Sun, 12 May 2024 14:11:15 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-51 ]]> In reply to XE.

👍

]]> By: XE https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-40 Sun, 12 May 2024 12:54:07 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-40 Clear points you made there, fascinating story telling. I also liked how you added some of the photos about our hike.

]]> By: Mushroom https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-33 Sat, 11 May 2024 13:20:25 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-33 So delicate!! pretty picture and typeface : )

]]> By: Leo https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Sat, 11 May 2024 06:50:37 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-27 Nicework!8888!

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-22 Sat, 11 May 2024 04:19:13 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-22 In reply to cm.

fact hahahaha

]]> By: cm https://mushroom-scholars.org/trip-to-hangzhou-by-crystal-8-4/comment-page-1/#comment-18 Thu, 09 May 2024 13:00:48 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10567#comment-18 Nice description I guess

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