Comments on: Travel to Kyoto https://mushroom-scholars.org/travel-to-kyoto/ Teaching & Learning English Thu, 15 May 2025 06:31:12 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/travel-to-kyoto/comment-page-1/#comment-690 Thu, 15 May 2025 06:31:12 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=13727#comment-690 Perhaps a little more description of your feelings might make your  writing more engaging.]]> I was getting dejavu reading this until I realised that this is the second report in our class from this part of Japan (see https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-to-japan/).

I like the disclaimer (These observations might be specific to the area I visited, so please excuse any inaccuracies.) and the images 🙂

Your theme of comparisons with China is interesting and you maintain it well throughout. You also have made good use of emoji/emoticon for purpose: ⛩️

Perhaps a little more description of your feelings might make your  writing more engaging.

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