Comments on: The “Travel” Seminar https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:48:28 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: DrTerretIsBald https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/comment-page-1/#comment-138 Wed, 22 May 2024 11:58:28 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10968#comment-138 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Aight thanks Dr Durian

]]> By: DrTerretIsBald https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/comment-page-1/#comment-137 Wed, 22 May 2024 11:56:08 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10968#comment-137 In reply to InfernoHotline.

Thanks for the comments, I added a paragraph

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/comment-page-1/#comment-129 Wed, 22 May 2024 08:13:46 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10968#comment-129 Consider adding the random image as a ‘featured image’ for your post so it shows up in the blog listings too.

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/comment-page-1/#comment-128 Wed, 22 May 2024 08:12:45 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10968#comment-128 Nice work synthesising information from the seminar, from literature and from your own philosophising into a well organised blog post 🙂

You work your way to your conclusion well. It will be interesting to see if you get any comments rejecting your conclusion.

You have an appropriately lively and chatty style that can make your blog post more attractive to readers, but there are quite a few minor language errors so check your tenses and punctuation carefully!

The reference you have provided for your image is a nice touch 😮

]]> By: InfernoHotline https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-travel-seminar/comment-page-1/#comment-110 Thu, 16 May 2024 13:14:51 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10968#comment-110 I like how you implemented undeniable evidence from various different readings and sources to reinforce your points, such as when you mentioned Wilma Rudolph’s proclaimation in the third paragraph to support your subjection that dreams are the fuel for success and motivation. You successfully persuaded me to rethink the definition of travel by explaining how the concept of journeys can be approached in limitless ways. Because you’re supposed to be reflecting on the seminar and not just the points us attendees covered, I suggest including your reflection for your personal performance throughout the discussion, which, of course, was unparalleled compared to the majority of the attendees.

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