Comments on: The salvation of Earth https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-salvation-of-earth/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:41:58 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-salvation-of-earth/comment-page-1/#comment-162 Fri, 31 May 2024 03:38:22 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11167#comment-162 Interesting stuff and you have made the purpose of the travel very clear, which is good because that was the aim of this blogging task.

I love the idea of interstellar communication using a “secret walky-talky” 😀
These sound effects at the end are also superb: “shwoosh! bang! biubiubiu!” I must get my kids to read this. They’ll love making the sounds at the end 😀

There are quite a few spelling errors and a few grammar mistakes so can you proofread your work?
Also, consider using the ‘topic tags’ and ‘featured image’ features so your blog post looks better in the blog listings (you might get more readers and commentators).

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