I can hardly breath in this planet filled with so much bleakness and desperation. The refuge center for humankind has already been drowned with dirt. The great human society already shattered in pieces. The ocean has dried out, The trees and plants have decayed, even the strongest species couldn’t survive. With such devastating environment, war between planets still continue. Earth is no longer a place for humans to stay.
In the year 3020, Earth has already evovled to a society where humans can go explore the outerspace. However one day a horrifying event landed on the face of the earth. A spaceship landed in our city, it was so big as if it could fit a city of people inside. Turns out we were right, thousands of armed alien like people started to come out of the spaceship. Their leader stood on top of a platform and said:” We have come here to rule this planet and take everything that belongs to you! Now my citizens, start your destruction!” With the given to the alien citizens, they came rushing our way, they started using lazer guns to scare us to scare us away, and killed everyone that went their way.
In the year 3032 which is now, the aliens have already controlled our planet. However, during that period of time, our great space explorer Mr. Callaway went on a mission to find a weapon that could safe our whole planet! Sadly Mr. Callaway has been missing ever since our last call with our secret walky-talky. We need to find Mr. Callaway and bring back the secret weapon that will save our planet.
My name is Captain Rosita. My mission is to find and rescue a space explorer, who myseriosly went missing a long time ago. I have already secretly stole a spaceship from our enemy. I also brought my partner Tommy along with me to help.
“I have gotten a signal on Mr. Callaway Captain Rosita.” said Tommy with excitment.
“Exellent, but from which planet? I see four of them ahead.” I repleid.
“It is impossible to know which one the signal is coming from.” Tommy said.
“I see. Then ill have to explore them all!” I said with excitment.
In a blink of time, we got to our first destination. We have landed on the planet of war. This planet had vlocanoes all over it, big stones and battle ships layed on the ground, many soldiers with black and red armer ready to fight at any secound. The minuet we stepped out of the spaceship, we heard, shwoosh! bang! biubiubiu! A battle arena was right in front of us!
Interesting stuff and you have made the purpose of the travel very clear, which is good because that was the aim of this blogging task.
I love the idea of interstellar communication using a “secret walky-talky” 😀
These sound effects at the end are also superb: “shwoosh! bang! biubiubiu!” I must get my kids to read this. They’ll love making the sounds at the end 😀
There are quite a few spelling errors and a few grammar mistakes so can you proofread your work?
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