Comments on: The Pizza Delivery Guy https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-pizza-delivery-guy/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:47:14 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: DrTerretIsBald https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-pizza-delivery-guy/comment-page-1/#comment-141 Thu, 23 May 2024 12:22:04 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11075#comment-141 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Ok thanks

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-pizza-delivery-guy/comment-page-1/#comment-140 Thu, 23 May 2024 08:05:25 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11075#comment-140 Interesting up to a point, but I feel I’ve read quite a lot of the last half before. Maybe you could have summarised what the pizza guy said and finished with:
“After this, I got sent back to my world. Not the restaurant, but my bedroom. That was a truly amazing unreal adventure. So I quickly wrote an account of what the pizza guy said as part of my blog.’ + link to your seminar reflection 🙂

A few sporadic language errors, mostly tense issues. Pay attention to that.
Images might help add reader interest.

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