Comments on: The most interesting thing I did during the holiday. https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-most-interesting-thing-i-did-during-the-holiday/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 01:59:40 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.4 By: Jessie Liu https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-most-interesting-thing-i-did-during-the-holiday/comment-page-1/#comment-382 Fri, 28 Feb 2025 09:46:40 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=12874#comment-382 😅]]> In reply to The Mighty Darth Hideous.

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]]> By: Jessie Liu https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-most-interesting-thing-i-did-during-the-holiday/comment-page-1/#comment-381 Fri, 28 Feb 2025 09:46:09 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=12874#comment-381 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Thanks a lot!

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-most-interesting-thing-i-did-during-the-holiday/comment-page-1/#comment-375 Thu, 20 Feb 2025 13:59:05 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=12874#comment-375 Thanks for sharing Jessie!
It’s nice to read about specific incidents rather than generic ‘played computer games and ate dumplings’ reports. It is also good to see you referencing what we studied in class 🙂

As your English teacher, I ought to point ought that there are a couple of language issues:
1. Some of your ‘was’ should be ‘were’. Check this.
2. You’ve used ‘me’ in the subject position a couple of times – should be ‘I’. Stylistically, ‘My family and I’ is generally preferred over ‘I and my family’ (same goes for ‘my sister and I’).

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]]> By: The Mighty Darth Hideous https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-most-interesting-thing-i-did-during-the-holiday/comment-page-1/#comment-366 Tue, 18 Feb 2025 03:26:39 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=12874#comment-366 I like your puppy / poppy confusion and your acknowledgement of the WW1 poetry unit we studied 🙂

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