Comments on: The Best Trip to Be Ever Recorded in History https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:49:48 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Leo Lee https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-310 Thu, 08 Aug 2024 02:01:54 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-310 Our school is a congenital absurdist activity organizer.
Why congenital?
Every activity I participated in was ill-concieved.
Why ABSURD?
Again, ill-concieved.

]]> By: InfernoHotline https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-91 Tue, 14 May 2024 12:52:41 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-91 I really admire your extensive adaptation of sarcasm and correlating it with positivity, especially how you used it in the first and the start of the last paragraph. "This helps us students to strengthen our senses as well as to build up our mental stability." No one, not even the organizers of this trip, can call you out for that one, and besides, this form of expression is very effective at showing your hatred for the accommodation. Do be aware of a few vague grammar mistakes though. I suppose you meant "but also in real life experiences," instead of "but also learning with real life experiences." I should mention your habit of leaving a gap at the front of each sentence of each paragraph. This makes it slightly easier to distinguish one paragraph from another, but this method of separating paragraphs usually isn't necessary when there is already a gap between two sentences by default.]]> I ought to be more critical. πŸ˜… I really admire your extensive adaptation of sarcasm and correlating it with positivity, especially how you used it in the first and the start of the last paragraph. “This helps us students to strengthen our senses as well as to build up our mental stability.” No one, not even the organizers of this trip, can call you out for that one, and besides, this form of expression is very effective at showing your hatred for the accommodation. Do be aware of a few vague grammar mistakes though. I suppose you meant “but also in real life experiences,” instead of “but also learning with real life experiences.” I should mention your habit of leaving a gap at the front of each sentence of each paragraph. This makes it slightly easier to distinguish one paragraph from another, but this method of separating paragraphs usually isn’t necessary when there is already a gap between two sentences by default.

]]> By: cm https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-77 Mon, 13 May 2024 13:15:30 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-77 In reply to ruaruarua.

Yes

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-63 Mon, 13 May 2024 08:26:28 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-63 In reply to Director Dr Durian.

Oh, and images help πŸ™‚

]]> By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-62 Mon, 13 May 2024 08:26:09 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-62 An interesting take. I would be interested to know whether your experience of the mental challenge of boredom taught you anything. Was it character building in any way? I like this: :pointlessism (I’m shakespeare, I am allowed to make up my own words as long as it is useful)”. If pointlessism wasn’t a word before, it is now! Maybe you will be able to use it and further define it in your sci-fi blog post πŸ˜‰
Be careful with statements like this: “Atleast that is how anyone who is not an idiot would think.” The person who made this decision might read your blog and get upset, and what is ‘atleast’?
It is better to give the name in full for “I and S ” because it isn’t common outside IB schools and, this being out there on the web, not all your readers will know what “I and S” means. Check your verb tenses! Consider synonyms for ‘pretty’.

]]> By: Logmeinu https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-54 Sun, 12 May 2024 21:50:21 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-54 In reply to InfernoHotline.

I would agree with your point. The price was certainly well-valued for those perfect-quality activities, and we would all agree that this trip was, no doubt, β€œThe Best Trip to Ever be Recorded in History.”

]]> By: ruaruarua https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-48 Sun, 12 May 2024 14:01:57 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-48 The best for real.]]> πŸ‘The best for real.

]]> By: InfernoHotline https://mushroom-scholars.org/the-best-trip-to-be-ever-recorded-in-history/comment-page-1/#comment-43 Sun, 12 May 2024 13:18:06 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=10632#comment-43 Truly a masterpiece. The priceless accommodation was the greatest place I’ve stayed in since my mother’s womb. The price, specifically οΏ₯2350, was totally, and I mean absolutely an affordable price for these exciting and impeccable activities. I agree with basically everything you proclaimed in your passage, and your implication of euphemism is a valuable asset we can all learn from. Truly “The Best Trip to Ever be Recorded in History.”

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