Comments on: Ten steps to kill a man and leave no trace——Shandong unique POISON https://mushroom-scholars.org/ten-steps-to-kill-a-man-and-leave-no-trace-shandong-unique-poison/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:41:58 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/ten-steps-to-kill-a-man-and-leave-no-trace-shandong-unique-poison/comment-page-1/#comment-218 Thu, 13 Jun 2024 03:51:33 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11384#comment-218 I lived in Qingdao for a few years and I’ve never tried it. I’ll have to go back there some time!

You have made a marked improvement in your language use in this blog post – well done!

These sentences are a bit odd: “But, people can’t endure their curiously at most of time. Sometime it’s good, but sometime it’s suck. So, em, i was suck” and you spelled “planning” wrong.

Thereafter, your language becomes engaging – describing why you wanted to try it, describing the flavour and describing family members’ reactions all very effectively 🙂

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