It’s good to see acknowledgement of the cafeteria here. It might not be perfect but it certainly is much better than the average school meal. I guess those who complain have been in top end ‘international’ schools all their school life so don’t have anything much to compare it to.

I wonder if you could be more specific about the “areas that need improvement”. If these areas are identified, I can feed back to the academic management and perhaps some action can be taken.

This cohesive device is confusing in the middle of your ‘Seventh Grade’ paragraph: “Of course, ”