In the universe, there’s so many planet and different kinds of organisms. About 1664, a planet called Nico is very well developed, and they’ve been curious about the outside world for hundreds of years. And this day, on Earth calender Jan.16, they get on their spaceship and went out to find a new planet and new creatures in the other galaxy. They went on a long trip that took about 2 Earth year, and finally found a beautiful blue planet covering with green and white. “That really is a good place!” said one of them, which is one of pilot from the spaceship, who was a very weird and emotional alien. The other’s in the spaceship were excited too, hope that there were new creatures on the planet. “I wish they were kind,” said another alien, “maybe we can live together if their environment is better than us.” The spaceship soon arrived on the surface of Earth, there’s buidings anywhere, it seems that the people were very busy. When they stepped out of the spaceship, every resident here gasped, they were short, ugly and with a big brain. People were scared and shouting, running, trying to escape from here. The aliens were puzzled, thinking about why the creatures were running from them.”That makes sense, they never seen as before.” as the pilot alien said it, there was sodiers caming here, “Finally, they know that we…” a bullet just shoot down to the floor closed to the pilot alien. “Run!” said the other aliens, they were chasing by the people, finally, they ran to a place where the human couldn’t find them, “That’s close,” said the alien pilot,”what were they using, our children’s toy?” “No, they were using a kind of weapon which is called a gun,” said one intelligent alien,”they were trying to kill us, you’re nearly shot by them.”
Cold sweat suddenly appears on the head of the pilot alien, “How about our spaceship?” said one of the alien,the pilot alien finally thought about it, and then said” leave it there for them to study, we can make a new one in a short time, can’t we?” Then, they started to look at the beautiful views of the city and the nature. “This really is a beautiful place, but with horribe creatures.” the smart alien thought, “Ouch!” called out of one alien, it crashed into a man’s arms,I mean leg. They were too short to see all the things, all they could see is the leg of the person. When the aliens just stated running, the person stopped them, as they thought that they were definitely dead, the man asked them.”Who are you guys?” the man called out, the aliens were curious about this man too, “We were from Nico planet, who are you?” the man is surprised that they can understand his language, “Oh, I’m Newton, a scientist, you have anywhere to live?”, the aliens thought about this man, and finally shook their head,” OK, maybe I can adopt you guys”he smiled,”but I have a condition”, said Newton, “Please help me with my report, I know you were from a advanced planet, please help me with my work.” The aliens agree and stay in Newton’s house for 2 years, help him to do a lot of studies, that’s why now Newton is a famous and genius scientists, back of Newton is not a successful wife but a bunch of aliens helping him. Till 1666, Newton signs these research report only his name, the aliens were upset, quietly leaving here,”Maybe Earth is not a very good place, they were all filling with fake and vanity, let us go.” pilot alien got into the spaceship they made new, and quickly took all the aliens to other galaxy to continuing the adventure.
Ah, a bit of sci-fi meets historical fiction – nice idea and relatively well executed 🙂
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