Thank u for replying and your love for this kind of genre! I’ll continue to polish my title and wording.

I feel bad about the fact that you haven’t read a single book about wasteland and its chaotic worldview. I made it intentionally to emphasize on the drama token place in the story. Besides, it also reads chaotic ‘cause its A DIARY written by different people and different perspectives 🙂

Having said that, you are describing a sci-fi horror, and do a good job of constructing the horror even if the events are somewhat unclear, so I acknowledge that the use of crude language adds a sense of realism to the narrator’s thoughts.

I like the diary format 🙂

The title needs more work 😉