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		By: Director Dr Durian		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[You have an appropriately lively style and provide a clear, balanced perspective. It is easy to understand your personal feelings from this experience :)

I think &quot;sour legs&quot; is Chinglish, but it works quite well given that you have already commented on the sourness of the raspberries. Maybe your post will add this usage of &quot;sour&quot; to English :)

Your time references are confusing here: &quot;The rest of the night we stayed in a big room and played cards for 1 hour. Thankfully we brought snacks and kept our phones and stayed up till late...&quot; Were you &#039;all night&#039; or &#039;1 hour&#039; or &#039;till late&#039;?

There are a few minor language errors or typos but these don&#039;t significantly impact on the reading experience.

Consider using images to give your blog post extra impact, especially a &#039;featured image&#039; so it shows up in the post listings and looks more attractive to readers. Also, you can use the &#039;tags&#039; function so your post shows up in the listings of related topics.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You have an appropriately lively style and provide a clear, balanced perspective. It is easy to understand your personal feelings from this experience 🙂</p>
<p>I think &#8220;sour legs&#8221; is Chinglish, but it works quite well given that you have already commented on the sourness of the raspberries. Maybe your post will add this usage of &#8220;sour&#8221; to English 🙂</p>
<p>Your time references are confusing here: &#8220;The rest of the night we stayed in a big room and played cards for 1 hour. Thankfully we brought snacks and kept our phones and stayed up till late&#8230;&#8221; Were you &#8216;all night&#8217; or &#8216;1 hour&#8217; or &#8217;till late&#8217;?</p>
<p>There are a few minor language errors or typos but these don&#8217;t significantly impact on the reading experience.</p>
<p>Consider using images to give your blog post extra impact, especially a &#8216;featured image&#8217; so it shows up in the post listings and looks more attractive to readers. Also, you can use the &#8216;tags&#8217; function so your post shows up in the listings of related topics.</p>
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