Comments on: My imaginary trip—Jessie https://mushroom-scholars.org/my-imaginary-trip-jessie/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 10 May 2026 05:54:30 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Jessie LIU https://mushroom-scholars.org/my-imaginary-trip-jessie/comment-page-1/#comment-1981 Sun, 10 May 2026 05:54:30 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=17759#comment-1981 In reply to The Gator Guy.

Thanks for the advice! Maybe I should add more details and transitions to avoid these jumps.

]]> By: The Gator Guy https://mushroom-scholars.org/my-imaginary-trip-jessie/comment-page-1/#comment-1960 Wed, 06 May 2026 07:40:58 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=17759#comment-1960 An interesting idea but a little confusing where you make jumps. I suppose the overall feeling you are trying to evoke is ‘weird’ and you certainly achieve that! Note that there’s a confusing tense slip at the start of your third paragraph.

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