Comments on: Middle School Journey https://mushroom-scholars.org/middle-school-journey/ Teaching & Learning English Sun, 02 Mar 2025 02:28:52 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.9.5 By: Director Dr Durian https://mushroom-scholars.org/middle-school-journey/comment-page-1/#comment-286 Wed, 19 Jun 2024 02:48:07 +0000 https://mushroom-scholars.org/?p=11803#comment-286 Awesome! I particularly like your appropriate use of ‘With all due respect’ as a softener leading in to explicit criticism of somebody’s performance.

That’s a very effective ‘before and after’ use of images!

A few language errors and I’d recommend a paragraph break between the praise of Mr Stew (now Dr Stew) and your comment on your physical growth.

As for the algorithm, it now exists, but likely needs fine-tuning. I’ll share in the next class 🙂

 

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