April 23rd is an unique day of the whole semester, because we are going to hangzhou! With impressive talk from principal, and with no complaints from students, with a great atmosphere, none of us feel unsatisfied. On the bus, we are free to use our mobile phone, eating delicious snacks, singing joyful song. The first day in Hangzhou was fabulous. We went to somewhere called “Xinxi wetland”, mostly wet ground and lots of plants and cute insects. We are so excited and fascinated by our first hike, which is totaly going up and down and up and down and cross the streams. After hiking, we went to a very luxurious premium restaurant, the foods were delicious, the decorations were great. I was sitting with Matthew and Ryan, they said that this is more most ediblestest restaurant ever eaten before, and so do I. And then, we went to 10 person dorms, it is totaly hygiene, it is enough big for every student in our class to lay down in it. We also had a time to meet others, also making some useful things, like fans and so on. I used to play Pokemon card game with my classmates, cheer my friend Joshua’s wonderful song calles “dangerous party”, we were affectionated by his attracting voice, with sexy dance, everbody was enjoying and appreciating his wonderful performance. After handsome sexy attractful Joshua’s glorious performance, we went back to dorms, my dorm was located near the door. We shared our snacks, cup noodles, and battery chargers.
Second day in hangzhou was also special. When sun rose up, all of my roommates were already woke up. Because we cannot wait for next trip. Before the trip, we went to exercise. We were so excited so we enthusiastically finished the first exercise in Hangzhou. By finishing the trip, we were so exhausted, because this trip was way longer than yesterday. I am probably sure that our trip guide noticed that, so we went to same restaurant we have went yesterday. I am worried that school spent so much money and have no money to go other delicoious restaurants. But I don’t need to worry about that because it is all in the plan. We went to experienced green tea, we spent all the time by experiencing tea.
I was so happy in this Hangzhou trip. I perhaps cannot forget this marvelous trip, I am so grateful of my school, by taking me and my friends to a place everyone can enjoy.
Better late than never 🙂
It sounds like a positive experience. I like your choice of adjective to describe the “ediblestest restaurant”. I don’t think it’s a word, but maybe we can make it one. If anybody else picks it up and uses it, we can contact the OED 😀
I’m not sure how appropriate it is to write about the relative sexiness of a named classmate in a public blog. Remember anybody in the world could read this so make sure you don’t write anything that could upset anybody. It will be interesting to see if other classmates have anything to comment about that.
There are a lot of basic language errors in your work. I’ll print a copy and highlight them for you to study.