Good use of simile to describe the cheese. I can imagine what you experienced. That kind of cheese is quite common in the UK. My parents and sister love it!
Check this word: “impulses” (I think you might have used the wrong word there).
Also a couple of minor grammar errors surrounding verb tenses.
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Good use of simile to describe the cheese. I can imagine what you experienced. That kind of cheese is quite common in the UK. My parents and sister love it!
Check this word: “impulses” (I think you might have used the wrong word there).
Also a couple of minor grammar errors surrounding verb tenses.