Actually I do not do research about that haha, only look up for some words in English to describe! Cuz I think I am quite good at doing this sort of descriptive writing hahaha, I often write descriptive poems actually! Ooo that’s sth that I do not really think of! Thanks for your advice! I did not fit into the write environment hahaha! But actually what I am writing is that we have sweat dripping down because we are running hahaha.

No 😭 but this summer holiday I’m going to England again hahaha and maybe I will visit there! Woah what an amazing night! wish I was there 😭

Did you do some research for that?

Plenty of descriptive work and you have used the the target literary devices very effectively.

The only part that is a little less effective is “sweat dripping beneath our feet”. Given England’s climate and your preceding paragraph, I reckon seawater might’ve been a better choice than sweat.