Again, I’m not convinced that “blog post4” is an effective title. In fact, given that you have only written two blog posts, it is very confusing!

This would probably earn you a reasonable score for ELA, but we require a bit more detail for ELL. In particular, couldn’t you summarise the views that were discussed during the seminar you led? After all, you must’ve been paying attention in order to have managed the session so well 😉