I also like the idea of adopting a very different perspective for your writing.

Yep, I got to the end 😉

I was wondering where the descriptive stuff had gone but, as InfernoHotline noted, when you unleashed it, it is very effective!

There’s an odd punctuation break in the last sentence of the paragraph where you meet Bucher and a couple of word choice or word form oddities to check, but on the whole, I agree with Inferno hotline’s enthusiasm.

Yes, Thanks for pointing that out. I admit it was a logical error, as I completed this in many days and perhaps forgot what I had written at the beginning. However, this can be explained as “I tried to run away but wasn’t fast enough because I was busy staring at what happened and instead fell in the water”. Well, the connection is very subtle though.

I appreciate how you admire my writing.

Thank you for the positive feedback.