You set the scene very effectively, describing your anticipation, and then do a pretty good job of exploring the sensory input from the street. I particularly like: “the laughter of the chocolate elves”, “the breath of magic”.
Is the image from the Harry Potter movie? It looks like Halloween in York’s old quarter.
Thank you for your feedbacks. The image in fact is from the Harry Potter movie, the scene shot in the Diagon Alley. But I guess it is samiliar to a celebration in the old quarter.
This is an imaginative approach!
You set the scene very effectively, describing your anticipation, and then do a pretty good job of exploring the sensory input from the street. I particularly like: “the laughter of the chocolate elves”, “the breath of magic”.
Is the image from the Harry Potter movie? It looks like Halloween in York’s old quarter.
Thank you for your feedbacks. The image in fact is from the Harry Potter movie, the scene shot in the Diagon Alley. But I guess it is samiliar to a celebration in the old quarter.