Last month, all the students in Grade 8 went to Hangzhou to hike for four days. I can only say that no matter how the process was, the experience was very beautiful and precious at the end.The most impressive thing is that every day here we have full exercise, every day will walk about 10 kilometers, such as climbing and tea picking. We went to the tea hill to pick a lot of tea, which was new to me, and learned how the tea we usually drink is picked and made.The scenery along the way and the classmates around us made the trip very interesting, we are all very tired but we still talked a lot.
We learned about traditional Chinese culture, and walked through mountains, waterfalls, walking paths, fountains, which, to be honest it really tested our fitness. A talent show was also held in the evening. Most important thing I want to mention is the night accommodation. We deeply experienced the group living, a dormitory with 8 people, relatively dark and damp, there is also no air conditioning (fortunately the weather is not hot) and a lot of bugs flying around, but fortunately life is still very happy, we eat snacks together, chat and do a lot of funny things together, but also more familiar with each other. I saw a side of my classmates and teachers that I wouldn’t have seen at school.
All in all, it was an unforgettable four-day trip and Hangzhou left me with many memories!
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